Wednesday, February 24, 2010

On Insurgence

Stifling, with dreams like
paper truths cremated
in the basement of the

Ministry, with intent
to burn all life and all
ambition out of me

Eternally, while my
sluggish heart hardly cares;
and all creation sits

Soundlessly, with faces
melting into blue-grey
oceans of digital

Urgency, with muteness
stemming from delusion
that our words are billed by

Quantity, and I?

I just want to float down frosty rivers,
navigating rapids and

To swim in sunny surf,
pursued by Poseidon and outsmarting the sirens and

To cross this continent by train,
rambling with Kerouac and all the tumbling miles of track
and singing with the click-clack and
To simply BE
breathing in the mountain air
or hiking all these cobbled stairs
or laughing with a brilliant old friend

At a table
in a bar
on a riverbank
with a drink
and a warm smile.

3 comments:

  1. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

    Paul, you leave me speechless. Again. Quit it. Except don't - ever.

    My favorite line:
    "all creation sits soundlessly, with faces melting into blue-grey oceans of digital urgency, with muteness stemming from delusion that our words are billed by Quantity."

    Oh, and the Ministry allusion was clever. And of course you know I love me some Kerouac.

    And to finish it all with a series of prepositions...as if to say that the details of life are the most satisfying...

    Brilliant.

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  2. Did I mention the flow of (and lack? of) transitions is ingenious. Stifling, Ministry, Eternally...one flows into another, like real thought. Except you make sense of it - unlike my real thoughts. Bloody incredible.

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  3. Thanks for the props! Ha that line that you quoted was actually the first part I thought of and the spark for the rest of it...impressive that you picked out the core of the piece like that!

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